Sunday, July 3, 2011

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday

I've started something new. On Sunday I will be posting six sentences from either a work in progress or a completed manuscript. Today I'm entering six sentences from my completed manuscript Dead Inside. In this scene Amelia, the heroine, who is transitioning into a vampire unbeknownst to her, has her first experience with bloodlust.

“You’re gonna cut your finger off or stab out your eye!"
  Tessa backed away still trying to open the bag. “I know what I’m doing, I’m a pr— Shit!” Tessa cried out, dropping the bag and knife.
  Blood dripped from Tessa’s wound. Amelia licked her lips, suddenly entranced…

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16 comments:

  1. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Great six!

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  2. Uh-oh Tessa, bad time to get clumsy. Welcome to SSS!

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  3. Could be a problem, Houston!! lol! Great snip!

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  4. Bleeding around a new vamp- oopsie! Great six :)

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  5. Oh no! Will she be able to resist?? Great snippet!

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  6. Can't say she wasn't warned. Loved teh 6

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  7. Looks like somebody is a little hungry. Great six

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  8. Love the urgency and how you've used an innocent mistake that could change everything.

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  9. Thanks for all the great comments on my six. I was really anxious about doing it. All you commenters rock, hard. :-)

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  10. Loved that.... "suddenly entranced"...I'm anxious to know what happens next! Great 6! And I love the title Dead Inside!

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  11. She did warn her. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

    ~Xakara
    Dawn's Early Light 6SS

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  12. Bloodlust, jeez, she must be freaking out. Great six!

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