Sunday, October 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hey, party people! Wow, Sunday again. Finally it is cooling off in the great state of AZ. Cooler weather always puts me in a better mood, which is why I’ve decided to give one more Six Sentence Sunday of my Contemporary I/R Dearly Beloved. A lot of people wanted to know what happened after last week’s six, so I decided… Why not let them eat cake.

So, without further ado here’s the continuation of Dearly Beloved, picking up in the kitchen with Chris between Renée’s legs where we left him.
Must, fight temp-tation, must be strong.
“What are you doing,” Renée asked, surprised her voice was steady given her trembling, quivering, loins.
He grinned.
Damn, him!
“My neck was starting to hurt from looking down,” he explained as if it were the most rational excuse in the world. All the while he stood close enough for her to know he’d recently brushed his teeth with mint Aquafresh.
Is there more? Of course, but unfortunately that’s my six. If you want to read other authors fabulous six, please visit www.sixsunday.com. Again, thank you so much for the comments they mean the world to me and if you didn’t know, now you know. You commenters all rock—hard.
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20 comments:

  1. Lisa FoxOctober 9, 2011 at 6:33 AM

    I am personally all for giving in to temptation. It's usually more fun.

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  2. Cara BristolOctober 9, 2011 at 6:53 AM

    Don't fight it! Go for it, girl!

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  3. lexcadeOctober 9, 2011 at 6:54 AM

    I agree. Getcha some, girl!

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  4. Sherry GloagOctober 9, 2011 at 7:38 AM

    Oh you so made me laugh that she could identify the brand of his mouth wash! Great six.

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  5. Carrie Ann RyanOctober 9, 2011 at 7:41 AM

    Go for it! Great job!

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  6. mariedeesOctober 9, 2011 at 7:42 AM

    LOL, great last line! fun six.

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  7. Gemma ParkesOctober 9, 2011 at 7:57 AM

    Give in to him, you'll feel so much better!

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  8. E. P. BeaumontOctober 9, 2011 at 7:59 AM

    OK, close enough to smell the toothpaste... intense.

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  9. UnknownOctober 9, 2011 at 7:59 AM

    I think it's a perfectly reasonable explanation. I also think she should just go for it.

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  10. Jessica E. SubjectOctober 9, 2011 at 8:53 AM

    Yes, I agree. Go for it! Great six! :)

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  11. Zee MonodeeOctober 9, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    How naughty of you to leave us all dangling like that! :) Great six though

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  12. Taryn KincaidOctober 9, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    Acquafresh! LOL!

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  13. AnonymousOctober 9, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    I absolutely LOVE your writing style! Nothing like a little humor - dry, wet, sarcastic even! - to make a good book a FANTASTIC read!

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  14. AnonymousOctober 9, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    Loved it! Right down to the toothpaste he used! Great six!

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  15. Vivien DeanOctober 9, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    Very cute! Thanks for sharing. :)

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  16. AnonymousOctober 9, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    oh, just give in, girl!!! great six.

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  17. J.C. MartinOctober 9, 2011 at 2:37 PM

    No, don't fight temptation! Give in! Great six!

    J.C.

    Join me in the Trick or Treat Spooktacular! Could you help make the Grand Prize a brand new Kindle Touch?

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  18. christine warnerOctober 9, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    love the internal about the toothpaste...great six

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  19. Elyzabeth M. VaLeyOctober 16, 2011 at 5:12 AM

    She should go for it! Great six!

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  20. UnknownOctober 16, 2011 at 6:01 AM

    Great piece. The six sentences were full of humour and plenty of steam - gotta be in the kitchen ;)

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