Sunday, October 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hey, party people! Wow, Sunday again. Finally it is cooling off in the great state of AZ. Cooler weather always puts me in a better mood, which is why I’ve decided to give one more Six Sentence Sunday of my Contemporary I/R Dearly Beloved. A lot of people wanted to know what happened after last week’s six, so I decided… Why not let them eat cake.

So, without further ado here’s the continuation of Dearly Beloved, picking up in the kitchen with Chris between Renée’s legs where we left him.
Must, fight temp-tation, must be strong.
“What are you doing,” Renée asked, surprised her voice was steady given her trembling, quivering, loins.
He grinned.
Damn, him!
“My neck was starting to hurt from looking down,” he explained as if it were the most rational excuse in the world. All the while he stood close enough for her to know he’d recently brushed his teeth with mint Aquafresh.
Is there more? Of course, but unfortunately that’s my six. If you want to read other authors fabulous six, please visit www.sixsunday.com. Again, thank you so much for the comments they mean the world to me and if you didn’t know, now you know. You commenters all rock—hard.

21 comments:

  1. I am personally all for giving in to temptation. It's usually more fun.

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  2. Oh you so made me laugh that she could identify the brand of his mouth wash! Great six.

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  3. Give in to him, you'll feel so much better!

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  4. OK, close enough to smell the toothpaste... intense.

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  5. I think it's a perfectly reasonable explanation. I also think she should just go for it.

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  6. Yes, I agree. Go for it! Great six! :)

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  7. How naughty of you to leave us all dangling like that! :) Great six though

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  8. I absolutely LOVE your writing style! Nothing like a little humor - dry, wet, sarcastic even! - to make a good book a FANTASTIC read!

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  9. Loved it! Right down to the toothpaste he used! Great six!

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  10. Very cute! Thanks for sharing. :)

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  11. oh, just give in, girl!!! great six.

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  12. No, don't fight temptation! Give in! Great six!

    J.C.

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  13. love the internal about the toothpaste...great six

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  14. Great piece. The six sentences were full of humour and plenty of steam - gotta be in the kitchen ;)

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