tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post2434065680736748195..comments2023-03-26T05:32:55.058-07:00Comments on Piper In The Dark: Six Sentence SundayPiperhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11040482633103310689noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-69531285568422206232011-08-08T19:31:59.519-07:002011-08-08T19:31:59.519-07:00I want to read more! Intriguing six!I want to read more! Intriguing six!Nichelle Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11981370647809108218noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-65914418408745236012011-08-08T12:29:40.448-07:002011-08-08T12:29:40.448-07:00I like this alot, very atmospheric!I like this alot, very atmospheric!Gemma Parkeshttp://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-38245272466056811172011-08-08T08:45:02.199-07:002011-08-08T08:45:02.199-07:00Very interesting. Can't wait to read moreVery interesting. Can't wait to read moreJayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-56746102578171161672011-08-08T05:00:15.158-07:002011-08-08T05:00:15.158-07:00Lots of writers do this, giving a snippet of their...Lots of writers do this, giving a snippet of their work. I usually find it frustrating because they just dump five to ten sentences with no set-up. THANK YOU for setting the stage properly, providing some background on the story and the scene. It actually makes the snippet so much more enjoyable!Isis Rushdanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773053495985834484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-57710119648680866332011-08-07T19:17:14.161-07:002011-08-07T19:17:14.161-07:00Great description. I could completely believe this...Great description. I could completely believe this scene and felt as if I were there. Great six!Sandy Nachlingerhttp://iousex.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-29529132436005447522011-08-07T16:46:20.139-07:002011-08-07T16:46:20.139-07:00I agree! Totally sucked me right in!I agree! Totally sucked me right in!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17327832955749311651noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-47441734849416149482011-08-07T16:45:32.001-07:002011-08-07T16:45:32.001-07:00Interesting. Great hook!Interesting. Great hook!Taryn Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130206764352777367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-70135111011564376262011-08-07T16:12:12.922-07:002011-08-07T16:12:12.922-07:00Thank you everyone who commented. I'm glad my ...Thank you everyone who commented. I'm glad my work is being received well. I'm a very anxiety riddled writer so it means the world to me to get such awesome feedback.Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11040482633103310689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-88306787634800341762011-08-07T15:56:07.342-07:002011-08-07T15:56:07.342-07:00The pacing of your prose really helps to establish...The pacing of your prose really helps to establish the tension. Well done!Vivien Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-38676532799411068442011-08-07T14:37:36.866-07:002011-08-07T14:37:36.866-07:00I love the idea of astral projection as a plot lin...I love the idea of astral projection as a plot line. Looking forward to reading more.Graylin Foxhttp://www.graylinfox.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-68783843273982309532011-08-07T13:30:47.436-07:002011-08-07T13:30:47.436-07:00Cool! Can't wait to see what's going to ha...Cool! Can't wait to see what's going to happen!Breehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01226218237015054123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-58402205769023264342011-08-07T12:44:28.977-07:002011-08-07T12:44:28.977-07:00Wonderful imagery of the dream-like state she'...Wonderful imagery of the dream-like state she's in! Can't wait to find out more! GREAT Six!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02422942404526720212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-15178439847100033012011-08-07T11:30:16.373-07:002011-08-07T11:30:16.373-07:00Love the six but I'm not crazy about being lef...Love the six but I'm not crazy about being left hanging. Better give us more next weekAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-23191151419582211542011-08-07T11:26:17.399-07:002011-08-07T11:26:17.399-07:00There's something particularly unsettling abou...There's something particularly unsettling about the place between, when something is losing one form and hasn't yet solidified into another. Cliffhanger cut at the end, too.E. P. Beaumonthttp://epbeaumont.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-58522272766782780872011-08-07T10:55:12.831-07:002011-08-07T10:55:12.831-07:00How could you stop there?! Such a tease! Great sni...How could you stop there?! Such a tease! Great snippet!Lisa Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04249215936412244450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-68454876084620363232011-08-07T10:02:39.331-07:002011-08-07T10:02:39.331-07:00What just happened? Damn - you got me good now I h...What just happened? Damn - you got me good now I have to read the rest! Awesomesix!Carrie Ann Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07970393378674676451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-47555020085404025962011-08-07T09:46:58.396-07:002011-08-07T09:46:58.396-07:00What a great cliffhanger! Now I must know what...What a great cliffhanger! Now I must know what's happening. Great six!Jennifer Lowery (Kamptner)http://jenniferloweryauthor.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-63302867595496783012011-08-07T09:40:44.394-07:002011-08-07T09:40:44.394-07:00Oh my! I was right there with her in that scene! F...Oh my! I was right there with her in that scene! Fab description - unsettling and just a touch unreal. Perfect for her plight! :)Zee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-23801260692357044642011-08-07T08:56:24.514-07:002011-08-07T08:56:24.514-07:00AHHH. I have to know more about what happened!!AHHH. I have to know more about what happened!!Rebecca Roycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14556741805325106199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-56372764994954504242011-08-07T08:28:43.252-07:002011-08-07T08:28:43.252-07:00Oh my, you've really succeeded in creating the...Oh my, you've really succeeded in creating the eerie suspense-filled mood here, great six!Adrianahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01628092657976031124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-54065055512635197462011-08-07T08:18:59.542-07:002011-08-07T08:18:59.542-07:00This is a really well-written description of her p...This is a really well-written description of her predicament. Fab snippet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5150879035826696626.post-54804724809325796762011-08-07T08:04:24.352-07:002011-08-07T08:04:24.352-07:00Really intriguing premise! Cool reaction to the ex...Really intriguing premise! Cool reaction to the experience!Laura Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06405372483109781087noreply@blogger.com